Although this poem is short and simple, I think your motives behind it were to use little explaining to convey a meaningful message of peace and friendship. Your attempt works, and I particularly like how you start your poem by directly stating what you want, your desire, and then establish what it is you want and what you will settle for. Again, way to use selective words that bring out a meaningful message. Grrrrrrrrrrrreat Job!
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aww stepha lol !tear! !tear!
Although this poem is short and simple, I think your motives behind it were to use little explaining to convey a meaningful message of peace and friendship. Your attempt works, and I particularly like how you start your poem by directly stating what you want, your desire, and then establish what it is you want and what you will settle for. Again, way to use selective words that bring out a meaningful message. Grrrrrrrrrrrreat Job!
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